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Comment by Svemir Brkic on August 14th, 2007 at 1:47 pm

The style of some sentences in “The Great Renunciation” section could be improved. Some examples:

“Having been recognized by the men of King Bimbisara, Bimbisara offered…” (repetition)

“Then, he remembered a moment in childhood in which he…, and he had fallen into…” (did he remember “falling into” or remembering caused it?)

“…Mara, the devil, who tempted him in various ways prevent his enlightenment…” (missing “to”)

“…interceded and asked that he teach the dharma to the world, as “There will be those who will understand the Dharma.” (repetition)

love it